2009年5月17日 星期日

[Home work] To explain the line graph

This was my homework of English meeting, and we had to try to explain the line graph. First, I will show my idea, then my teacher’s idea.

In my opinion,
I would like you to look at this graph, which shows the death toll of Swine Flu in Mexico over the past 7 days. As you can see here, death toll fluctuated between 2 and 91 from 4/25 to 5/1, death toll has rose sharply on 4/17, 4/29 and 4/30, but it also become slowly and reached to 91 on 5/1.

In my teacher’s opinion,
Let’s take a look at the ling graph. The death toll of Swine Flu in Mexico was on 25th April. It rose slightly to 7 on next day on the following 3 days, the death toll increase dramatically from 7 to 80……

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