[Home work] Write a love letter (02/25)

This is a love letter for my home work of English writing.
It really is very difficult for me, but in my teacher's motto"You'll never know until you try!".
So I spent about 2 hours just finished it.


Love Letter

Dear my deep loved wife,

I am sorry about quarrel and I want to tell you something borrowed this letter.
You are extremely indispensable in my life.
When I seem you at first time, I knew you are my only true love.
You are so beautiful and charming, like moon so bright and comfortable.
But you are only one and so faraway, how can I touch you?
If I would be a star then I will follow you forever.
Would you give me one more a chance? I will love you forever.

Beloved,
Ken